Grammar Police (From The Beach)

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Author: Tomparker
Friday, August 15, 2008 - 2:08 pm
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I love checking in on PDXRadio - except when I cringe looking at simple grammatical errors.

Since I've painted most of my house already this year, perhaps a constructive crib sheet is in order for those who might benefit. Anyway, it will keep me busy for a minute.

They're The contraction of the words "They" and "are" as in "They're the biggest bunch of cheapskates in the world". That apostrophe is important.


Their Possessive pronoun. Like his, hers, ours. e.g. "Their playlist is stale."


There I know what you're saying: "For crying out loud Tom, there can be an adverb, a pronoun, a noun, and a verb! I'm just a disc jockey!" I hear you, sister or brother. But, just for the sake burning up some of my excess free time, let's say you care. Remember there has here buried in it to remind you that it refers to a place. e.g. "There they go again with their relentless cost-cutting. They're determined to squeeze every dime out of that place! Next thing you know, they're on life support, their credit is ruined and,when you get there, their station is padlocked."

Not satisfied to stop there, I offer:


You're That pesky contraction thing again, this time starring "you" and "are". e.g. "Tom, you're the biggest horse's patoot that posts on this board!"


Your Enough of my definitions, let's check Webster's: "1. of, belonging to, made by, or done by you: also used before some formal titles Your Honor, Your Majesty 2. Informal the: used to designate a typical member of a group or class: often followed by average" e.g."Tom, I've had enough of your unsolicited help. You're no longer welcome here."

Must run, I think I hear Benjamin Moore calling my name!

Author: Amus
Friday, August 15, 2008 - 3:13 pm
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I think your just being picky.

Their! I said it!
Someone had too.

Author: Newflyer
Friday, August 15, 2008 - 3:17 pm
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Just like "it's" and its.
"It's" is a contraction for "it is."
"Its" is used in places where the former isn't.

Another one I almost caught myself doing:
"Than" is used to describe something in comparison to something else; i.e., "Grammar discussions are better than senseless insulting of newbies."
"Then" is used to describe time, or to explain that one thing implies another; such as "If voicetracking and automation are the norm, then those who disagree simply don't follow the business."

I was always taught to remember use of contractions and apostrophes by thinking of what the sentence would sound like using both words. If "living in this part of town at it is best" doesn't sound right, then don't use the apostrophe.

I know, all the training to write things orally and how they sound and such... If I could work in customer no-service for a total of 6 years and still manage to write decent call notes with proper spelling and grammar while the caller is in a screaming tirade at the top of their lungs because they don't like their internet service or loan servicing or whatever, then anyone can!

Author: Bunsofsteel
Friday, August 15, 2008 - 5:02 pm
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Dear Tom Parker,
I've been craving Salt Water Taffy lately and I was wondering if You could bring me back some Taffy. Since YOU'RE at the beach I thought You wouldn't mind.
Thanks so much Tom,
Love,
Buns Of Steel

Author: Tomparker
Friday, August 15, 2008 - 5:11 pm
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Dear Buns,

To clarify, I am on the beach, not at the beach.

When I get off the beach, I will gladly buy you a little bag of salt water taffy. Do you like the kind with peanut butter in the middle? They're the best!

Tom

Author: Egor
Friday, August 15, 2008 - 5:46 pm
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nothing like some quality time at the beach

Author: Semoochie
Friday, August 15, 2008 - 8:27 pm
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Have you ever considered putting the "Big" back in YOUR name?

Author: Tomparker
Friday, August 15, 2008 - 9:06 pm
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Tony Bennett left his heart in San Francisco. I left "Big" there. I think it's in a humidor at Dunhill's on Union Square.

Author: Randy_in_eugene
Friday, August 15, 2008 - 11:49 pm
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One thing I see occasionally that I'd like to add to Tom's original post:

Thier is not a word at all.

Author: Skeptical
Friday, August 15, 2008 - 11:50 pm
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Where's djfresh now that the Grammar Police is here? :-)

Author: Skybill
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 1:44 am
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Commas are important too.

Consider these two sentences. The same verbiage, one has a comma and one does not!

I helped my uncle Jack off the horse.

I helped my uncle Jack, off the horse.

Author: Skybill
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 1:48 am
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Then there is the Southerneese School of linguistics;

Y'all; Singular.

All Y'all; Plural.

All y’all’s; Plural possessive!

Author: Roger
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 7:15 am
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Tom may be on the beach but he's just visiting. I OWN THE BEACH!

Author: Gotoutlongago
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 9:47 am
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Another of My personal pet peeves:
The past tense of forecast is:

wait for it

FORECAST, NOT FORECASTED!!!

Author: Semoochie
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 11:02 am
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You've got my ear, regardless. :-)

Author: Don_from_salem
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 1:02 pm
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Thank you, thank you, Tom.

The errors that irk me the most are the usage of "I" in the object of a sentence or preposition and "me" in the subject.
Examples: "Me and Peggy Sue went to the dance."
Ruth's Chris served a delicious steak dinner to my wife and I.

Author: Eastwood
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 1:13 pm
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In the line of work that many of us were, are, or hope to be engaged in, the ability to create a sentence is a mandatory, fundamental skill. Thanks for blowing the whistle, Tom and everyone else. It's gotten pretty bad.

Author: Bunsofsteel
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 3:25 pm
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This Thread should not be under Portland Radio.
It SHOULD be under Politics and Other Things. Let's please make note of this, since this has NOTHING to do with Portland radio.

This is just not like Big Tom Parker, he would NEVER put a topic in the wrong thread.
Its apparent that Tom Parker has been 'Throwing a few back" while on the beach. That or someone needs to remind him to wear sunscreen while on the beach.

Author: Cweaklie
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 3:40 pm
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Now, let's have a discussion of the correct pronunciation of the word, "Beijing".

Me and the little lady are heading to the patio now.

Ta Ta.

Author: Eastwood
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 3:59 pm
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Hard J. No question.

http://www.azstarnet.com/sports/253004

Author: Alfredo_t
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 10:06 pm
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One mistake that burns my butt is the use of apostrophes in plural nouns or singular verbs:

The Hillsboro Goodwill has many TV's for sale.

Jim ate a lot of burrito's at the Cinco De Mayo festival.

Edward R. Murrow smoked a lot of Camel's.

Jennifer pedal's hard to go up the hill.

The KGO signal pack's quite a punch.



No, no, no! :-(

Author: Kennewickman
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 10:44 pm
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I used to have a sister in law who from the first time I ever knew her always said :

" We seen "....THAT drove me CRAZY from about age 15 or so...I never did correct her out of respect for my step brother mostly...

And I had an elementary teacher about 5th grade who always taught us that if you get confused over whether or not to use " I " or " Me " in a sentence just take away the addtional name and say the sentence with the I or Me by itself. If it sounds correct it is, if doesnt sound right it isnt ! Like...Edna and me or Me and Edna went to the fair....So does "Me went to the fair " sound right??

Author: Randy_in_eugene
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 10:46 pm
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Edward R. Murrow smoked a lot of Camel's what?

>>This Thread should not be under Portland Radio.

But people working in a communications medium should, well, uh, you know, um...

Author: Alfredo_t
Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 11:53 pm
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Rick Emerson umm's and ahh's a lot.

Murrow smoked about 60 Camel's every day!

I have a bad feeling in my finger's from typing these grammatically incorrect sentences!

Author: Roger
Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 9:28 am
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My personal pet peeve:

Outside, we HAVE GOT 74 degrees......

HAVE GOT?

Beijing pronuciation...... PEE--KING! :-D

Author: Kennewickman
Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 11:27 am
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PEE KING is a pronunciation version that is over 20 years old now. I havent heard that for a very long time.

Author: Stevenaganuma
Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 12:21 pm
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On the subject of pronunciation, check out this site.

http://www.yourdictionary.com/library/mispron.html

Author: Nibs400
Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 12:58 pm
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"In the line of work that many of us were, are, or hope to be engaged in, . . ."
You failed "fundamental skill."

Author: Eastwood
Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 2:00 pm
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Actually, no, but I can see how you would think so. It's a pretty complex sentence utilizing past, present, and future forms of the verb "to be." My apologies for going over your head.

Author: Missing_kskd
Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 2:03 pm
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:-)

Author: Alfredo_t
Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 3:13 pm
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> Edward R. Murrow smoked a lot of Camel's what?

I guess he smoked the smokable part of the Camel. He did most of his puffing in an era before filtered cigarettes, so it wouldn't matter which end he lit!

Author: Rongallagher
Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 6:06 pm
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"Podunk Area Weather CALLS FOR _____"

Hey who called for this crappy weather? I sure didn't. I ordered the Beijing duck!

And here's one for Roger. "Yunz" (true spelling unknown), short for "you ones". See "all y'all" above. Or "yunzes", same as ""all y'all's" Really big in Penna.

Author: Semoochie
Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 10:50 pm
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I believe(and this is subject to interpretation)that the "comma" after "are" is unnecessary because it's followed by "or", the place of which it was taking.

Author: Alfredo_t
Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 11:15 pm
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When I moved to Altoona, PA in 1986, I heard "yunz" for the first time. I wondered what the correct spelling for this mystery word might be: "yunce?" I remember classmates getting annoyed when I asked them, "how do you spell that?" In Altoona, I also had a teacher who pronounced the word color "keller" and motorcycle "motorsickle."

Author: Semoochie
Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 11:30 pm
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There is a supervisor at my workplace who, when encountering a word beginning with a vowel, will drop the vowel and say the word! It's about halfway between the "Name Game" and a Monty Python sketch!

Author: Craig_adams
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 12:19 am
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Pappy Mirthday Smooshie!

Author: Roger
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 3:28 am
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According to a woman who works for me, my Chimbley need repairing

Author: Brade
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 8:04 am
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An interesting usage change (at least to me) happened in the early '90's when "anyway" suddenly became "anyways." I'm not annoyed by it, just interested. For annoyance I'd have to pick my least favorite expression of the past decade or so...."my bad." Yikes!

Author: Eastwood
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 8:13 am
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I think you're right, Semoochie...I intentionally break some comma rules to make a sentence scan better, though usually by omitting them. My bad.

Author: Stevethedj
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 8:25 am
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I once saw a note from a niece to here uncle. It read "ant sue called."

Author: Nibs400
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 8:46 am
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I will concede that your comment was "over my head" if you can tell me why the sentence fragment I quoted begins and ends with "in."

Author: Eastwood
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 8:52 am
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Ah..so that's the problem. You're right. Your original post was vague.

Author: Semoochie
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 10:04 am
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"In" is perfectly fine to begin a sentence as in, "In the beginning...", "In the course of human events..." or "In" is perfectly fine to begin a sentence as in... :-)

Author: Eastwood
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 10:23 am
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No, Rick's right. The sentence in question includes a redundant use of "in." While that's admittedly more subtle than the more egregious examples of bad writing cited elsewhere, Tom's purpose in starting this thread was to provide constructive suggestions for improvement, which we can all use. Lord knows I can.

Author: Kennewickman
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 2:45 pm
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Another weird useage of the word All. Which is
" Alls "...As in Alls you have to do....or Alls he has is a knife and fork....I suppose it started as a contraction of "All that"

Also, anyways is a variant that has been around awhile. If you ever watched the HBO series Deadwood, they used 'Anyways' quite a bit. It was an idiom used in the late 19th century in the Midwest.

Author: Alfredo_t
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 4:19 pm
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I almost screwed up when I wrote a post on this forum that referenced the communities of St. Helens and St. Johns. I had thought that both of these names had apostrophes in them, as in St. John's being short for "St. John's city." There are other places named after St. John that do use apostrophes, but the North Portland suburb is not one of them:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/St._Johns

Apparently, there is no rhyme or reason in play here.

Author: Don_from_salem
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 6:57 pm
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To Alfredo:
I had never heard "you-uns", "we-uns", nor "us-uns" until I moved to Athens, Ohio in 1971 to attend Ohio U., but that is how they talk in the West Virginia panhandle and those parts of Ohio and Pennsylvania that abut it.

Recently, I was corrected (by Jack Elam's daughter, no less) for not saying "motorsickle".

Author: Notalent
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 9:23 pm
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I've noticed a lot of confusion between HISTORIC and HISTORICAL lately...

The story was a historical account of the events...

KISN 91 is HISTORIC.

Author: Semoochie
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 10:59 pm
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It occurred to me that I dropped the word, "when" from my above example but it doesn't change things. Beginning a sentence with a preposition is perfectly acceptable. Ending one is not.

Author: Skeptical
Monday, August 18, 2008 - 11:26 pm
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"Beginning a sentence with a preposition is perfectly acceptable.

In fact, its required if you're a wise and powerful Jedi Master.

Author: Mickproper
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 12:45 am
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I agree about the importance of comma placement. I always enjoy it when I have the opportunity to announce that the audience has just been listening to the classic Jazz tune, "What is this thing called, love?" (It sounds funnier if you say it with a lower-class, British accent; imagine John Lennon)

Author: Roger
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 3:57 am
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And then, there are all of the people who work at BOEINGS

Author: Brade
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 5:36 am
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And head downtown for lunch at Pike's Market....

Author: Magic_eye
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 7:24 am
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"...there are all of the people who work at BOEINGS"

And at Fred MEYERS, too.

Author: Sky_sterling
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 1:54 pm
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Add Nordstroms and Meier and Franks (at least in the old days)...

Author: Roger
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 3:20 pm
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I'm having pork and bean for dinner.


(budget cut)

Author: Eastwood
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 4:08 pm
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The first I heard the term "Boeing's" was in Seattle in the 1970's from some people who worked there, used ironically, to imply that it was a Mom and Pop operation...

The business of dropping the possessive from St. Johns and Sauvie's Island was, I read somewhere, a decision by the government board that oversees naming, and intended to avoid implying actual ownership of the town, island, mountain, or whatever.

Ending a sentence in a preposition is not against the rules, except in Latin. You wouldn't say, "In what did I just step?" You'd say, "What did I just step in," and you'd be OK, except that you'd stepped in something. "Where are you from?" is a whole lot better than "From where are you?"

A problem I'm hearing in newswriting locally is the failure to distinguish between lie and lay. You lay something down, people lie down by themselves, and both Clapton ("Lay Down Sally") and Dylan ("Lay Lady Lay") were grammatically incorrect. But they'd sound dorky if they got it right...almost as a dorky as local newspeople who write that "the body was found laying in the street."

Author: Semoochie
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 4:19 pm
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Isn't it "Sauvie Island"? "Lay is also past tense as in, "I lay down yesterday and may lie down today". It never sounds right.

Author: Bhone2000
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 4:36 pm
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I had someone email me today and one of the sentences was.."I hope your not to disappointed".

How about "would of" and "could-of" ?

Also I see alot of people say use the word loose for "lose".

Check out Craigslist sometime for the cream of the crop as far as mispellings go. It's amazing.

Author: Murdock
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 4:39 pm
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Local newspeople would never say "the body was found laying in the street."

Some pin-headed consultant would make them say "the body IS found laying in the street."

Author: Eastwood
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 7:07 pm
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Murdock IS right on! The use of present tense in news writing is an old trick to convey immediacy. I know it was part of the ABC stylebook in the late sixties...but you have to be sharp and careful in its use. Otherwise sounding dumb.

Semoochie, the Sauvie's possessive is a common way to refer to the island where many people go to, uh, hang out, and even some locals I know use it. The possessive is officially gone, but it lives on in many official references. But the technically correct name doesn't have the apostrophe "s".

Author: Kennewickman
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 7:20 pm
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This all reminds me of an OBIT I looked up on microfish once at the Tacoma Public Library of an ancestor of mine. He died in 1908 and at the very end of his Obit it said. " The body is at Mellinger's". ( Mellinger's being a funeral parlor of course ).

There is something resoundingly descriptive about how the printed word was used, particularly in yester-year, dont you think?

Author: Alfredo_t
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 7:51 pm
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I find the Bob Dylan example a little bit ironic in that the intended meaning of the lyrics is communicated better by intentionally breaking the rules. If the lyric had been written "Lie, lady, lie...," many listeners would have probably thought that the song was about not telling the truth.

Author: Jimbo
Thursday, August 21, 2008 - 10:08 pm
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People may say Sauvie's or Sauvies Island but that is from years of misuse. When I was young growing up in that area, we never referred to it that way. It was always Sauvie Island. Look at the 1961 USGS map that Andy Brown linked to in the KBMS fined thread. It clearly states "Sauvie Island". A late 50's Pittman map of Portland shows it as Sauvie Island.

Author: Alfredo_t
Thursday, August 21, 2008 - 11:11 pm
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Scroll near the bottom of the following page for a brief name history of Sauvie Island:

http://h7ht.blogspot.com/2007_11_01_archive.html

The island name officially became Sauvie Island in 1891. Prior to that, it had gone through many different names that included "Multnomah Island," Wapato Island," "Sauve Island," "Souvies Island," and "Sauvies Island."

Author: Stevenaganuma
Thursday, August 28, 2008 - 11:12 pm
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Here are all the basic grammar rules on one long web page.

http://www.dailywritingtips.com/english-grammar-101-all-you-need-to-know/


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